The following posts are created in order to best fit into
these different social media platforms:
Facebook, Twitter, LinkedIn and Instagram.
Post 1: Facebook
Join
the Young Dance Collective in an unforgettable adventure in STOP: WHO ARE YOU
http://www.youngdancecollective.org/events.html
http://www.youngdancecollective.org/events.html
The post will be published during the day, since this is when Facebook users are most active.
Post 2: Twitter
Check out STOP: WHO ARE YOU and experience the movement
#performance #YDC
Post 3: LinkedIn
Young Dance Collective welcomes you on STOP: WHO ARE YOU. Read more on: http://www.youngdancecollective.org/events.html
Post 4: Instagram
People call it dancing, we call it living. You can join Young Dance Collective in STOP: WHO ARE YOU, so we can show you how we LIVE.
#justdance # lovelife
Use of you/we/hero: 2/4
ReplyDeleteKeep using those powerful words/phrases like “unforgettable adventure” and “experience the movement” etc, but it still needs more content and reason / insert more “you” - what’s in it for the reader to like this initiative? / insert a link in one of the posts to the website/campaign /
Use of writing techniques and criteria 1/4
Your post need “juice” and content. Use imaginative language about the body, dancing, living etc, and make clear what the initiative is all about.
English grammar 2/2
Total 5/10
Good luck!
http://digitalwriting14005557.blogspot.nl/p/dc-4.html
Improvements:
ReplyDeleteFacebook Post:
Join the Young Dance Collective in an unforgettable adventure in STOP: WHO ARE YOU. We will show you how people can express their feelings only through movement of their bodies.
Twitter Post:
Check out STOP: WHO ARE YOU and experience the movement. Let us bring you into our world. The world of DANCE.
http://www.youngdancecollective.org/events.html